supani123
May 11, 2005, 06:43 PM
HONEST EYE
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
When actually I wet my eyes unknowingly
The drop down tears try to witness magic spells of my life
When purposefully I avoid hearing others
The silence upholds my character but scolds my attitude
When my heart starts beeping differently from the normalcy
I investigate deeper into the causes that led it to falter in such a way
When my mind keeps cool even during hot discussions
Every body gets angry saying that I am not responding to the current events
When my body rejects all unhappy and unconvincing matters
No one tries to eulogise my renditions in their right perspectives
I thank ever and for ever GOD ,the almighty for gifting me an honest eye
Which never gets perturbed or distracted so easily as all others in majority simply do.
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Unknown
May 18, 2005, 02:40 AM
This poem is awesome.
Unknown
May 18, 2005, 12:19 PM
This is an excellent portrayal of some aspects of some humans lives.
rhymer
wakinyan.mani
May 25, 2005, 07:00 AM
| QUOTE (Unknown @ May 18, 12:19 PM) |
This is an excellent portrayal of some aspects of some humans lives. rhymer |
I concur.
PROST!
supani123, I lift my glass to you.
Rhymer, likewise.
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