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PLEASANT WAVES!
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supani123
May 08, 2005, 04:24 PM
PLEASANT WAVES
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DO you prefer to test the quality of my love?
It is as pure as snow that has fallen afresh My Dear!
It smells like a rose that has opened up its lips just now in my garden
Spreading fragrance as sweet as honey My Beloved!
It simply raises to the heights of un surmountable mountains
Throwing a challenge to reach its pinnacle to assess the glory My Heart throb!
It flows in currents to the heart of hearts in high velocity
Like fresh water that streams in good quantities I during rainy season My Darling!
It sizzles in the minds like star studded sky Simply brightening
the erected welcome altars to reach the cool very cool moon my throb!
It goes deeper and deeper in to the unknown depths
Exhibiting the valuable and priceless corals in sheens resembling My Love!
It whistles like waves weaving pleasantly in cozy and cool breezes
Simply conveying the presence of comfortable chances of my gracious love!
My love in all stakes symbolizes the beauty of nature
Accrediting to the permanent stances of times irrespective of the seasons My Dear !
+Franziska+
May 09, 2005, 02:09 PM
surprised by your very clever alliteration
way to go!
a very bright construct, a remarkable poem.
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