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the day of floating in the clouds

waking was a slow, warm event
don't know where the night went
put it on hold until later
called over a transparent waiter

drinking tea was a slow, warm event
luxurious and heaven sent
put in an order for later
and sent my compliments to the creator

laying in the sun was a slow, warm event
time well spent
put off thinking until later
this priority is greater

just had to get away from the crowds
spent a day floating in the clouds

©2005 Hey Hey
RMBOD
Perfect sentiments for the weekend! Love this.
hollywoodsnoopy
I breathe in every line you write Hey Hey. Your writing in magnificent. I can't begin to describe how much I truly enjoy your poems. Keep on with it. You have a fan here(I know there are more lurking in the shadows)

Nikki
RMBOD
Shadows? Wait, does she mean Nika?
Hey Hey
Hey, can you two stop posting so early in the morning - you woke me up again! Just kidding. 4.26am and Dana has joined me on the clouds!
RMBOD
Check out "The Source Of My Personal Joy". I've just posted it! I've been on that cloud for about two years now.
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