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WET HANDS
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Above and above in the far of skies
My thoughts are drifting in high air

The native land couldn’t permit
Our disembarkment so easily

The sky was roaring in lights and thunders
In the midst of hopes and desires

The white collared customs made their souls sink and stink
All with the dirt and dusk aberrating in high stakes

The free ,frank and fearless joy we enjoyed in other nations
Slowly started realizing its roots soiling in the wet hands of devils

Every eye vying with questionable looks and sights
making me sultry and shocking all the time with no solution as such in cites
Hey Hey
great stuff. is the last part "incites" or "in cities"?
supani123


DEAR HEY HEY
I RETURNED TO MY NATIVE[GUNTUR--ANDHRAPRADESH INDIA]
U MADE ME TO COUPLE IT NOW[CITE]
cite

making me sultry and shocking all the time with no solution as such in citesthat ignites/incites


cite
Function: verb
Text: 1 to give as an example <cited several experts' opinions to back up her argument> -- see QUOTE 1
2 to make reference to or speak about briefly but specifically <cited a number of similar instances> -- see MENTION 1
Hey Hey
ummmm, citation eh? your words are just fine though.

how are you in India? Are you glad to be home? what is it like where you live?

good luck to you, dear friend.
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