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Mandy Wood
SCRIBING MY TALE

She will never be satisfied.

That’s the way it is written,
In some great leather bound book
Scribed in crimson ink and golden leafs.

My scribe is a cruel man;
Laughing at my pain,
Giving me strength,
Taking it away,
Cheering when I fail,
And crying when I prevail.

How easily I seem to fall…

As heroines often do,

Just before they realize,
That one day they’ll make it through.

+Steven Curtis Lance
You ask:

"Any good?"

I say:

VERY good!

Your use of italics is very effective here, by the way; it is like another voice, and on the page it is what we call in German "Augenmusik," eye-music.

Your poems show wisdom and leadership, Manders Flanders; you were born to be the "leader of the pack."

Well done, as always, and ever better.

Love,

+Stevie
Mandy Wood
"leader if the pack" I sang that song in a talent show one year! Thank you for you props Stevie I really did think this one was a little odd, but it's good to know that is was odd but in a good way. Does that make sense? I wish I could write like this every day, but alas I can only when inspiration strikes.
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