Sunrise

To kiss your lips with sunrise
With moisture in your new eyes
And sighing with the harmony of love

To stroke your skin with tender fingers
Around your hair scent lingers
Of a dreamland alighting from above

To hold your face with passion
This naked girl, to fashion
Sending waves of pureness like a dove

To meet your smile with tears
As daytime innocence appears
Your hand, my hand, protecting like a glove

©2005 Hey Hey

This is extraordinarily well-made, my dear friend; I especially love the rhyme-scheme. The mechanics of the poem, the structural elements, are exquisite yet unobtrusive; they are masterful and do what they are supposed to do: carry the content without getting in the way. Your poem illustrates how form facilitates function, how construction carries content.

A very tender and loving poem.

I love it. One of your best ever.

Love,

+Stevie

Hey Hey,

I bet I will read this one over and over again. It struck me in a way that cannot be described. You are excellent at what you do here. It is a beautiful write with such feeling and raw emotion. Wish I could find that kind of content, happiness, love. Someday

Nikki

Lovely, utterly lovely. Well done!!!!

Many thanks Steven and Nikki. It's nice to receive positive words from two fellow poets of standing.

It's very beautiful Hey Hey, I love it. You have such wonderful style.

Many thanks Mandy.

i look forward to see this forum explode in passion

thumbs up Hey hey, sehr schoen.... gentle, kind, gefuehlvoll.

Franziska with your help it will...it is. Thank you.

sun rising in the east
it is dawn at its best
slowly opening up
like a flowering lip

love always learns from the day
as lifes' toils are strolling under way
the rosy cheeks resemble the sun shine
oh my beloved a poem erupts from the glass of wine

i deliver all the smiles like a busy bee
quenching the thirst of my soul in drinking sway
you look to me like a fragrant flower
spreading humanness in all the showers

my tears even if in chilled winters
if make you cry i am in shivers
wipe them out with soft wipers
try not with knives that are harsh in spheres


on reading your poem HEY HEY .
WITH GREETS
SUPANI

thank you for reading Supani

I like your style and can't wait to read more of this. YOU know I love your works!

ah, yes the feelings you have in dreams i have experienced that quite alot. . i love this one . . keep trying ... they say love hides in all corners . . so make sure you don't walk in circles. .
misty..

misty, what can I say? I so like to know that you read my poems. your own works are always inspiring of sentiment and grace.