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SUPANI123
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SPRING IN WINGS
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When life motors on bumpy road
A HOPE resonates describing the road ahead as silky and soft

When mind gropes in thick black darkness in rings
A SOUL comes out and lights up lamps in strings


When a human sails in odd trends of the sea and shudders swiftly
A Guiding STAR leads peacefully to the shore


When heart flies directionless in the cloudy sky
the WINGS are added to strengthen the smooth fly

The HOPE ,the SOUL ,the Guiding STAR and the Added WINGS
just personify the culture OF friendship that almighty EVER springs

R.PURUSHOTHAMARAO
supani123@yahoo.com
+Franziska+
I very much enjoy what you write, i hear that you and +Steven are great pals already, hopefully we'll get to know each other too
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dear sir/madam,
thank you for your kind comments. more to hear from you soon
urs
supani
supani123
IT IS A GOOD POEM
VINDU
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