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The Battle Of Saturday

A mighty battle raged
The birds were frightened away!
The clanging, churning, banging sounds
assaulted ears that saturday

Slicing, cutting
Sweating, Cursing
The noise grew as others joined one by one

And finally,
in the silence that followed...
"Honey! The Yard is Done!"
Unknown
'the birds got frightened and shift away'

just an addition. simply beautiful lines that swirled in the heart
with greets
supani
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