You try to feel this pain I'm feelin
bottled up like a fish and not dealin with

tried to come from this so fast
envoloved in myself with a broken cast

I tried to explain it all to you
you threw me away and took my shoes

The smell of your clothes I feel right here and true
remembering the days that I held you

For all the time that has come and past
never knew it would be over so fast

You left me broken and torn
My heart full of rage and a little scorn


When I think of what you had shown me
I know there was more to life then.....

Give me a place to hide my head
all the notes I may have read

I never knew who you were
but you tocuhed my life with your..

This I see the end, it is coming
I am though feeling like this, scummy....

Very nice brother dear.

Nikki

Wow, Jay Jay, both of you are so talented, this is a very good write!