hollywoodsnoopy
Mar 30, 2005, 10:36 AM
The most inane bullsh#$%
Flows from you mouth
And yet I continue to listen
Your cunning attempts amaze me
Do I look a fool to you?
I must for sure
Or you would not try
To pass off lies
As believable truths
You are but a fool
To think me so naive
One day very soon
When you least expect
I will flee from here
Never to be heard of again
Leaving this monster behind
This blatant disregard you gave
The last beautiful laugh
Shall be mine to treasure
I will hold it close to my heart
Forever
Hey Hey
Mar 30, 2005, 11:39 AM
the flow is great
Windowmaker
Mar 30, 2005, 08:30 PM
A passionate, haunting write. It's good to not be a doormat. Good for you. I'm in your corner my fellow poet. Writing is a wonderful outlet, isn't it?
Warm wishes,
Kevin
hollywoodsnoopy
Mar 30, 2005, 10:33 PM
It was so weird. This one hit me when I was in the shower. I hurried up and ran out of the bathroom to write it all out before it left my brain. That is how it is for me. I don't even know where it came from, but I loved the way it sounded in my mind, so I posted it here.
Nikki
Mandy Wood
Mar 30, 2005, 11:18 PM
Inspiration strikes when least expected. I like it!
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