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setting sun in west ay its best
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setting sun in west
scenic beauty at its best
nature cams in it's chest
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sun setting in west
a living scene at its best
nude tree shying to the feast
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azure sky in fall colours
as setting sun transforms
nature speedily beautifies
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knowmad
before the magnetic polar caps switched the sun raised in the east


funny, huh
Rick
The sun still rises in the east and sets in the west, so far as I can tell.
Hey Hey
Is there an up and down in the universe?
Rick
Yes. Above my head is up. The opposite direction is down.
Shawn R
Ah,
but suppose you're setting out to get in over your head
and behind your back people talk you down
and say your head is "up your backside"
how do you settle which way is up
when you're feeling down
even when things are looking up?
I don't mean to be a downer,
I'm just looking to get a rise out of someone.
knowmad
QUOTE (Rick @ Mar 25, 02:48 PM)
The sun still rises in the east and sets in the west, so far as I can tell.

no way?!



damn


the things i miss

are incredible at times

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