freakakygurl
Mar 23, 2005, 01:46 PM
When I see your smiling face
My heart beats faster
When I see your sparkling eyes
My heart beats faster
When I see that you are happy
My heart beasts faster
When I see your smiling face
The pain grows stronger
When I see your sparkling eyes
The pain grows stronger
When I see that you are happy
The pain dulls
When I talk to you
My heart beats faster
The pain grows stronger
But I know that it makes you sad
When you see I am down
So I put on a happy face
And act like I'm happy
Just so I can see you smile
freakakygurl
Mar 28, 2005, 07:40 PM
Editied ..I like htis better..
Rachel
May 13, 2006, 06:09 AM
good, really good i liked it very much especially the end part "it is not the fall that kills u"
L.U.L
Love U Loadz
Meklo
May 17, 2006, 04:28 AM
I quite liked it too. Interesting... though perhaps the line "my heart beats" faster is a little too repetetive. Otherwise quite good!
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