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supani123

Mar 22, 2005, 12:03 PM

Spittoon
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Hard hit by the thrashing of sun beams
I fly a spit on his renowned base
OH! to what climax does it turn to in pace
Once again it comes down hitting swiftly on my face
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knowmad

Mar 22, 2005, 12:06 PM

HA!

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