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knowmad
.........12:34
11:11
2:22
1:11
1:23

programed to destroy
save yourself from
self destruction
so die now
i once heard,
i cant wait to
see whats next,
i once heard,
youre too good
for this world
i once heard,
youve got a sickness
about you
i once heard,
deja vu is a divine feeling
i think its god saying hello
i once heard,
itd be tragic
not to hear
such things
such lovely
things are to
be
felt
Hey Hey
I don't get the numbers (maybe I'm not in a Mensa mood). But the poem is great. I like the punctuation - adds an intelligence to the imaginative style. Content is revealing and largely personal. A poet's poem.
knowmad
wow. cool, thanks heyhey, sorry about the pm thing. i love you
knowmad
oh and the numbers are because ... why not?
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