This is the first time I've looked at this part of the forum, what exactly are you to do, it looks like fun.

Originally, this site was for poetry collaboration, write a line and let someone else write the next line, etc.

Lately, the "poetry in motion" site has morphed into the "what supani writes" site.

Oh, well, whatever

dear unknown
it is now to my knowledge that you have known well. have i protruded into somebody's
fortress. if others do feel like that let them own it completely . i am ready to quit
hurting nobody and loving all. iam visible to all and i sincerely thank god
for giving me this chance. i pray peace to all. thank you
with greatest greets
supani

maybe supani should create a new board for his work anyway. a great deal of it is very interesting and certainly innovative/unique.

Thanks for the response Hey Hey! So one person writes a line and we go from there. Let's see.....?


A place for hearts loved and scorned...

A place for hearts loved and scorned
A beautys face bared unadorned

This cafe simmered too late and too long...

supani
A place for hearts loved and scorned
A beautys face bared unadorned

i stand like an autumn tree duly deleaved

A place for hearts loved and scorned
A beautys face bared unadorned

I stand, an autumn tree deleaved
Her smiling for me, now bereaved

This cafe stales our borrowed lives

supani

dusk or dawn i donot wait to get relieved

A place for hearts loved and scorned
A beautys face bared unadorned

I stand, an autumn tree deleaved
Her smiling for me, now bereaved

dusk or dawn i donot wait to get relieved
from the pit of paasion as anybody believed

^^^^^^^^^^^^^
supani

shall i start another theme

"death you are great but declared dead"


pl respond and expand

supani123@yahoo.com

Last Rites a Wrong First

death,
you are great
but declared to be dead
as the rites of the last are intoned
and so read

tears,
you are slight
yet you bow the strong head
as the last of the wife we now lay
to her bed

and the last of this life built with trouble and pain
to be canted and broke in the guise of insane

all the times, left and lost, wander struck in the gaze
as my feet tow the dirt and the breadth of this maze

far along shall I pass in the way of this lass
far along shall I go while my heart fears to know

ever bound to this tree, broken shard in the back
and along, without thee, I am cursed what I lack


P.S. Thank you, supani
you inspire me.
S.

hay
cute and nice
thaku sir
supani123
another start

live the life as thyself my dear!

live the life as thy self my dear
be clear without any revolving fear
the love is to be understood in a brighter way that is better
to keep away all the other darkened things that are sour and bitter

supani123@yahoo.com


please take another thread and continue

" be present even in the times unplesant"

but i know this wil happen as i believed
hopeless thoughts come across my way
i listened to my heart who told me to stay
whenever i am alone i feel i m with you
surroundings are dark and i m in blue