Open your eyes
Just keep breathing
In and out
In and out
Slowly
Lose yourself in slowness
Remember to Forget
The blues will fade to grays
And the grays, in time,
Will fall away
Leaving behind
Nothing
Just keep breathing
In and out
In and out

like this much - calm.

This really is beautiful, Misty; it does have a certain quietude to it, with an internal depth and darkness which I can appreciate, and which rings true.

I love each and every line, but especially this one:

Remember to Forget

Deep and satisfying. You're a wonderful poet, one who can say the most profound things in very few words.

Good to read new works of yours here again; I'm happy to see you posting, and I will try to reply more faithfully. Things have settled down in my life now, and I'm ready to read some good poetry.

Respect and solidarity, always.

Love,

+Stevie

thanks steven and hey

misty..