misty_tears
Mar 16, 2005, 04:53 AM
Now and then,
I taste you
I see you in my mind
Wrestling with myself(ish) Past
Wondering: When does it end?
At what point do I come to a place
Free of your thoughts
Dirty promises made to no one
A sordid ring that holds me together
What a tired, tired place
I have revisited
Perhaps it is –
It just is.
+Steven Curtis Lance
Mar 16, 2005, 03:24 PM
Oh, this is really something!
Really profound.
I love this:
myself(ish)
And then, especially, this:
Dirty promises made to no one
A sordid ring that holds me together
...and so on to the end of the poem, and then this great last line, in splendid--I want to say "existential"--isolation:
It just is.
Beautiful work as always, my dear friend and fellow poet.
Respect, solidarity, and love always,
+Stevie