wakinyan.mani
Mar 08, 2005, 09:53 AM
It starts
a bean
small and round
consumed
in hunger
by ounce or pound
chewed
and mixed
sometimes with meat
and finally
expelled
a buttocks bleat!
A windy call
to one and all
announcing yesterdays meal
A gaseous point
a pungent reminder
a rip-roaring, aromatic squeal
Small and round
ounce or pound
shared with friend or neighbor
Just don't smoke
within 50 feet
for fear the explosive danger!
copywrite 2003, J. Sirak
Shawn R
Mar 08, 2005, 12:51 PM
You are brave to share this with others,
I feel singled out for this honor.
This is profoundly disturbing,
I can't get it out of my head.
I guess I'll have to stand up and walk around.
Hey Hey
Mar 08, 2005, 08:19 PM
Just a load of hot air!
rhymer
Mar 11, 2005, 12:12 PM
Words of art; explosive stuff!
Keep 'em coming and blow away the opposition!
Shawn R
Mar 11, 2005, 01:47 PM
hmmm...
what rhymes with "compulsive art"...?
This poem speaks on so many levels,
it gets under your skin and then works its way up to the surface.
Cathartic.
Highguy
Mar 11, 2005, 04:58 PM
that was awsome......its like your saying what everyone is thinking.......
i think everyone can relate to this peom in one way or another.........
in conclusion that was awesome!!!!!!!!!
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