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Mandy Wood
Shifting depths, emotions stir.
Smiles form, tears fall.
Levels filtering,
these thoughts and fears.
Balances measuring,
consequence and coincidence.
Mortal immortality at best,
close these eyes and rest.
Windowmaker
Mandy,

Beautifully written. Don't know how I missed it. This one is a bit more challenging than your other writes so I'm taking a shot in the dark and guessing that the underlying message here deals with one's conscience. Am I right? If not, please help me out.

Warm wishes,

Kevin
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I wrote it because I often times can't sleep because there is so much going through my mind and I can't turn it off. Some of it is my conscience, some of it is random thoughts, random fears, or questions about life and other stuff. One thought becomes another, and that becomes another, and so on till I feel like I'm a little bit crazy, but I'm sure you, everyone knows what that's like.

Thanks for the post!
Mandy Wood
It was me I confess it is my post!!! I didn't realize I wasn't signed in.
Windowmaker
I suffer from the same affliction. Must be problematic in highly intelligent people! LOL

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