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| supani123 |
 Dec 14, 2004, 09:48 AM
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God  Group: Basic Member Posts: 1947 Joined: Nov 28, 2004 From: Guntur, Andhra Pradesh, India. Member No.: 4092  |
THE LIFE , ULTIMATE
I‘ve a flair for poetry Reading volumes And writing hundreds Didn’t satisfy my soul I’ve a fancy for dressing Wearing full, half sleeves T shirts with various colours and designs didn’t satiate my taste I ‘ve a caring for health Eating only after verifying nutrition facts And ignoring other foods Didn’t stop bulging of my medical test I’ve a hobby of loving My gardening flora And tending of pet fauna Didn’t make my retired life happier I’ve obedience towards deities My daily chants of HIS GRACEFUL names And eulogizing his greatness Made me comfortable and contended all the time. R.PURUSHOTHAMA RAO Supani123@yahoo.com |
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| caitiff |
Dec 15, 2004, 03:39 PM
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Awakening Group: Basic Member Posts: 146 Joined: Apr 22, 2004 From: drifting Member No.: 2111 |
THANK YOU!!! i just read some (no offence to anyone, but this is a critique board) immature sob-sob poetry that is little more than'cry for me, life is pain'. anyways, your poetry was beautiful, spoke to me, was written well and has a good beat. i really like the floaty was this was written, speaking to one and all. thank you again, and please, keep posting
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| supani123 |
Dec 16, 2004, 04:24 AM
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God Group: Basic Member Posts: 1947 Joined: Nov 28, 2004 From: Guntur, Andhra Pradesh, India. Member No.: 4092 |
dear sir,
i thanq for the treat ''ll know more about u urs prao |
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