 2004-11-1 12:00:00 AM, Transcendental Sonnet #1096 |
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| +Steven Curtis Lance |
 Nov 01, 2004, 05:56 PM
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Transcendental Sonnet #1096:
1 November 2004 for Silke On this eve of the election I shiver under blankets quietly At this crossroads of reflection As I wonder what will become of me Liberation or rejection Of the only hope I see Dawn of hope dusk of dejection If the junta stays: defection? This is the hour we face our reflection... What kind of people are we? What is a lie and what is true? What kind of place is this to be? Silke I wish I were with you On this eve of the election +Steven Curtis Lance Copyright MMIV Silke LLC |
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| Jasper |
Nov 01, 2004, 07:00 PM
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Dearest Steven,
you are the sweetest poet I have ever read.....so frailgile, so simply human, and so bloody sharp when necessity condones you to be only as such...simply irresistible is the word! I once thought I hated trancendualism.....but I am quickly learning from your poetry, that only you should name it as such as it's all of you! Very very cool manthing and poem! Love Jasper  |
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| misty_tears |
Nov 02, 2004, 02:59 AM
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as sensual and lulling as any opiate...great... you have amazed me.
misty.. |
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| itsinhiseyes |
Nov 02, 2004, 03:31 AM
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Steven. It's a tense time with only hours to go. The world turns. Some things change and some stay the same. If Kerry wins the military industrial complex will keep on grinding on, I'm sure. The junta runs deeper than the white house.
Your poem is great. I only hope your faith in hope sustains you through these trials to come. Keep your thermals at your side my friend. You may need them yet awhile |
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