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post Oct 29, 2004, 01:40 AM
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How long you have filled my mind, and how do my lips seek to enjoy you.
Each clasp my teeth find, as if the next temptation.
Put your hands to my skin, and feel how I warm to your touch.
Do you know your hold, and the throat that I bare to you?
You have me,
Captured by simply your word.
So speak my body into your mind, and hold me until morning rises.
Your hair in my clutch knows my passion for you,
As surely as a heartbeat.
Eyes closed, mind open.
Your bottom lip I suckle in my mouth. The fleshy softness - sexy, lustful.
Drawn into an oral embrace. Rolling upon my tongue,
Driving me to want more.
Should I deny these thoughts, is my path in error?
Tell me the truth else I swallow you alive.
If holding you until the light was my limit, this could never be plenty.
Precious to me you are, and so tenderly forever the reward
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post Oct 29, 2004, 02:21 AM
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I like it very much. Did I see this before on the critique board?
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