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| sbhenderson |
 Oct 28, 2004, 10:35 PM
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 Awakening  Group: Basic Member Posts: 141 Joined: Dec 13, 2003 From: Seattle, WA, USA Member No.: 804  |
Scarlet in the low light's glow and taffy ribbons to come undone.
This kiss of mystery that tangles itself through my hair, clenching with breathless soft sounds. You permeate as if singed incense, settling on my skin with scent, leaving me to wonder where does smoke come from, where has it went... and when will it burn again So soft are the thoughts, and quiet exterior. Lay back on the red velvet, and a single stroke to the back of my hand... for I don't want yet to forget in sleep, these thoughts that you bring to the smile upon my lips. C.2004sbhenderson |
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| Hey Hey |
Oct 28, 2004, 11:20 PM
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Another outstanding poem. The little deliberate grammar trips are a delite.
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