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| Eternum 1 |
 Oct 26, 2004, 05:56 PM
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I gazed upon the heavens
The silence of the spheres Hints of the last pure celestial note The moment after crescendo When the conductor exits the stage To walk in the garden of his creation |
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| Hey Hey |
Oct 27, 2004, 03:00 AM
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What a lovely poem.
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| Eternum 1 |
Oct 27, 2004, 04:09 PM
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Thank you Hey Hey
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| Jasper |
Oct 28, 2004, 01:40 AM
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I like this very much, but not the he part!
I wrote here on this piece yesterday also, but my reply disappeared..huuhhhh? Did you remove it or did I pick the wrong chocolate up again! signed...Confuddled? |
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| +Steven Curtis Lance |
Oct 28, 2004, 02:22 AM
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I like this poem too. I'm sorry I didn't tell you so before now.
Jasper, I'm +Steven, the Poet in Residence here; pleased to meet you. I certainly didn't remove anything from this thread. I'm sorry if something disappeared. I've been pretty busy with my new book and trying to keep warm in my old cold haunted house of late. The only things which I ever remove are the sadistic batterings of cruel crazies which spill upon our board and spread like viruses from time to time. There are these two young ladies who do everything but wait outside my front door with shotguns, so I am a little wary, and I am grateful for Hey Hey and our other excellent moderators. But I didn't hear about them removing anything of yours either. Can you just put it up again, whatever it was? I didn't see it. My respects to the poet and to those who replied. And Jasper, I'm glad to have you with us. Peace. |
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| Hey Hey |
Oct 28, 2004, 09:04 AM
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I can't remember removing anything from here but it has been very busy of late and I'm not infallable. As Steven suggests, repost it and we'll soon see if there was/is a problem.
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| Eternum 1 |
Oct 28, 2004, 12:17 PM
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Newbie Group: Basic Member Posts: 33 Joined: Apr 20, 2004 From: British Columbia Member No.: 2075 |
Thank you Jasper, although it wasn't my intent to anthropomorph first cause, I found the image of a consituent walking through "his" creation useful from my perspective which is somewhat panentheist.
Btw chocolates are like wives..there is no such thing as a wrong choice just more choice. |
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| Hey Hey |
Oct 29, 2004, 06:27 AM
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Supreme God Group: Basic Member Posts: 7763 Joined: Dec 31, 2003 Member No.: 845 |
The world has paid a big price for SSRI's!
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