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| itsinhiseyes |
Sep 30, 2004, 02:40 PM
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Overlord ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Basic Member Posts: 300 Joined: Sep 28, 2004 Member No.: 3587 |
I made good friends with a girl in a Napster chatroom. We had an extraordinary relationship. We lived in different worlds but shared a similar mindset. She was both bright and witty. She inspired me to write. She became my muse.
One day she sent me the strangest email full of dark and morbid fantasies based on death and graveyards. She sounded suicidal. I wanted to try and cheer her up. So I wrote this for her. It's just a bit of fun, and should be viewed in that context. Restless Corpses Restless corpses stir and howl into the night But I am drawn towards a calm inviting light. Passing gravestones standing sentry over silent sleeping bones I make my way towards this one particular stone from whence there comes a weird and scary, sounding noise of throbbing, beating, knocking, pounding. Restless corpses stir and howl into the night But I am drawn towards a calm inviting light. Arriving at the stone I stand and stoop to wipe away the dust And see the name inscribed upon it is a girl I've come to know and trust In fact, to be honest, someone I'd never really met Just a girl who I used to chat to on the internet. Restless corpses stir and howl into the night But I am drawn towards a calm inviting light. Suddenly a fist clenched hand bursts straight up through the hardened earth and grit, Disappears then re-emerges with a second mit, And if that were not enough Holy s---!! A torso struggled bit by bit To wriggle out from deep down in its graveyard pit And get a grip Upon the ground no further than a metre from my feet. Then this half alive and half dead freak Began to look at me and speak Restless corpses stir and howl into the night But I am drawn towards a calm inviting light. It's funny but the first thing I thought and said Was Christ baby, you look short But then she said, ‘f--- you man, are you blind, Cant you see I've left my legs behind’ And peering through the mist which swirled about and looked like smoke I now quite clearly saw that this was not a joke For down inside the coffin were the separated feet, legs and muff Of what I now knew must be, could only be the skeletal remains less the resurrected body arms and brains of my dear cyber friend, Ms Jennifer Ruff. Restless corpses stir and howl into the night But I am drawn towards a calm inviting light. Hey I thought, This is outa sight If I had any sense I'd take flight but drawn in by this extraordinary light I feel the full seductive force of this poor wretched mite, as it bleats it's cries for help. Is this not she methinks who used to keep me up beyond the normal waking hours my muse for whom I once wrote 'de ping a di ting' this lovely stranger from across the seas whose light shone out and reached into my soul, this angel from another world whose soothing wit, on many nights my only company, came fleetingly and magically into my room to lighten up my sad and lonely life.................. Restless corpses stir and howl into the night But I am drawn towards a calm inviting light. Damn. Look at the time. I'm at it again. Staying up late writing to you. But I thought it important that you knew That I cared And that we shared An unusual but very worthwhile thing, A sorta kinda friendship type a ting. I would like to write more but hopefully, there's enough Of the right kind of stuff to breath a little life into your heart and make you smile a while and with any luck Make you less gruff, and more tough My dear dear Jennifer Ruff. Right now My one and only emotion Is a wish to reach a hand across the ocean But alas, I can only do the best I can from here in distant Enge lan. With whatever words of wisdom I can muster once I've sussed the meaning of whatever sad and sorry tales you tell me in your enigmatic mails. Restless corpses stir and howl into the night But I am drawn towards a calm inviting light. I mean, for all I know this could be a windup perhaps a lyric from whatever new hip hop tune you've heard. How am I supposed to know, That's the trouble with the internet, what you see is not always what you get, but I bet I'm right your life right now is not very bright, so hold tight. I’ll get the next flight |
| rosediamond |
Sep 30, 2004, 03:21 PM
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Demi-God ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Basic Member Posts: 751 Joined: Feb 20, 2004 From: Wonderland Member No.: 1261 |
Such a sweet thought! This is a very kind gesture, and a very nice piece of work! The lines working as a chorus worked well with it.
~Much Love~ Megan |
| Hey Hey |
Sep 30, 2004, 05:32 PM
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Different this, and I just love innovation. More soon please.
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