Another Bad Poem Submission - Waste Of Life

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Another Bad Poem Submission - Waste Of Life, Another bad poem from a long time ago.

Just give me a ten for Crying out loud!

(10) It sucks Big Time!	[ 1 ]	[25.00%]
(9) It sucks quite a bit!	[ 0 ]	[0.00%]
(8) It pretty much sucks!	[ 1 ]	[25.00%]
(7) It's really not very good.	[ 0 ]	[0.00%]
(6) You plagerized my two year old, didn't you?	[ 1 ]	[25.00%]
(5) Awe, your mom wrote this, huh?	[ 0 ]	[0.00%]
(4) It's okay, really.	[ 0 ]	[0.00%]
(3) It's a great beginning.	[ 1 ]	[25.00%]
(2) It's actually pretty darn good!	[ 0 ]	[0.00%]
(1) Hot damn! Why hasn't this been printed?	[ 0 ]	[0.00%]

Total Votes: 4

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Windowmaker	Aug 20, 2004, 11:52 PM Post #1
Overlord Group: Poetry Moderator Posts: 372 Joined: Jan 23, 2003 From: Corsicana, Texas Member No.: 516	Waste Of Life I'm drinking my beer. My eyes filled with smoke. I sit here and wonder, "Is my life just a joke?" The pencil and paper, memories of the mind. The story is of you but will it be kind? My life is near over. There is nobody left. I sit here and wonder, "Am I waiting for death?" Copyright, Kevin V. Reese, 2004

ganji	Aug 21, 2004, 08:58 AM Post #2
Aspiring Group: Moderator, Full Member Posts: 89 Joined: Dec 22, 2003 From: AZ Member No.: 815	great beginning

Rick	Aug 21, 2004, 11:33 AM Post #3
Supreme God Group: Basic Member Posts: 5916 Joined: Jul 23, 2004 From: Sunny Southern California Member No.: 3068	Truly mediocre. At least I'm not the only one who can't write decent bad poetry.

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