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The Place Between, Lingering of the indecisive

rosediamond	Mar 08, 2004, 09:07 AM Post #1
Demi-God Group: Basic Member Posts: 751 Joined: Feb 20, 2004 From: Wonderland Member No.: 1261	Zenith of frigidity Speechless and unmoving Crystallized flesh of the timeless Fates cannot reach the threads Figures for the lifeless passion Drawing out the still surrender Within the icy frame of unwelcome gain Distant from the heartbeat Unfeeling of the loss Waiting in the endlessness, unknowing Numb inside, in silence Unwary of the dark Comforted by nothing Fighting for nothing An echo and a shadow A touch of winter wind Rouse the souls, undreaming, to awakening The messenger will beckon at the door of golden refuge Waiting for the answer torn from lips of burdened solitude

Mar 10, 2004, 06:39 AM

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QUOTE (rosediamond @ Mar 08, 06:07 PM)

Distant from the heartbeat
Unfeeling of the loss
Waiting in the endlessness, unknowing

~Megan.
This is a very well written poem of yours.
I like it.
Good work.

Keep posting.

Silke

rosediamond	Mar 12, 2004, 09:04 AM Post #3
Demi-God Group: Basic Member Posts: 751 Joined: Feb 20, 2004 From: Wonderland Member No.: 1261	Thank you, Silke! Love hearing from you! Take care, okay? ~Best Wishes~ Megan

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