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| KinaLove |
 Mar 06, 2004, 11:53 PM
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“Xâ€
Within the breeze I yearn your tease...off into the unknown Trapped inside your world I'll stay hypnotized… mesmerized Eminent Sensations Blinded by dark, cold dry air… Warm halo surrounds me Breath descending down my cheek, making me weak Gentle thunder rumbles the earth, my ethereal being melts Uninhibited libido digresses from my veins Your tongue invades my body Your tantra obscures my astral... Your erotica devours my mind... Darkness shatters… flashes of light Crescive passion... I see it in your eyes Carefully placed into that divine trance Waves of oral pleasure entail my very treasure As your body unwinds, aggressions pour upon me Taking in all… to the brink Charismatically attune with desire Upward glide...Allow inside Strength and rise… Shape after form… Palms to spine… Ocean waves Control taken as yours Your lips are conquerors and mine will obey Untempering manhood serves amore Penetrating… Inflaming my loins with your oozing sexual mantra No intermission, just natural power I feel the fire… burning desire… rising higher… Engulfing my mind Enrapturing my flesh Enlightening my soul Rob me of my creamy essence I’m ready to explode This feeling so intense Precipitation exploding from the heavens Also from my flower Release to me...let all breathe I know you're close...from that growth so nice to meet you...Ecstasy Kristina Olivia Canerdy Copyright ©2003 Kristina Olivia Canerdy |
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| sexyslim |
Mar 08, 2004, 08:38 AM
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your poem is fantastic where did you get this stuff,keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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| KinaLove |
Mar 08, 2004, 08:42 AM
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Thank you so much... This poem was inspired by someone who will always hold a special place in my heart. To much of a good thing turned into "x"..........
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| lilsims711 |
Mar 25, 2004, 08:55 PM
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your poem was amazin!!!!i'd love to write that good im on thestarlitecafe.com put in jen sims to see my poetry...maybe u could give me tips...keep it up!!!
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| JasmineG |
Apr 13, 2004, 10:11 AM
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WOW! DAMN GOOD! Really, where did you get this staff?
One of the most erotic poems I've red. |
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| The Stranger |
Apr 19, 2004, 12:43 AM
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you're writing is much like someone I used to know and miss very much.
Your work has good imagery and excellant color. The mitre and timber of your word usage is done very well; the essence of your work lacks the crudeness of a lot of stuff I've read at this site so far. Keep up the good work. Hope to see more. Until... |
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| KinaLove |
Apr 26, 2004, 03:31 PM
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THANK YOU ALL SO MUCH FOR YOUR COMPLIMENTS, ESPECIALLY TO YOU "STRANGER" I AM GLAD THAT I COULD TOUCH YOU SO DEEPLY THROUGH WORDS. BEST OF WISHES TO YOU:)
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| ANTHONY MITCHELL |
May 28, 2007, 10:55 PM
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Never...did I know you wrote poetry.
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