 I Am A Wolf, Magicalcookie |
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| MagicalCookie |
 Dec 25, 2003, 03:37 PM
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I am Wolf.
It is my cry you hear in the night, My eyes that gaze at you from the shadows. It is my heart that beats in your Soul, My strength that makes you whole. I am Wolf. I am in you. You are in Me. For I am a wolf. No matter how far you get, you will all ways hear my cry. By: Magicalcookie |
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Dec 25, 2003, 06:41 PM
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nice
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Dec 26, 2003, 08:34 AM
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Newbie Group: Basic Member Posts: 49 Joined: Dec 24, 2003 From: In a Meadow under a old oak tree Member No.: 827 |
thanks
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Dec 26, 2003, 09:17 AM
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Line 9; I'm confused by the word 'mader'. Could you explain it please?
I like it overall, "My eyes that gaze at you from the shadows." Nice line. Keep writing x |
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