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| burnout_00 |
 Apr 17, 2011, 05:12 AM
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Overlord  Group: Basic Member Posts: 319 Joined: May 17, 2003 From: Los Angeles, CA Member No.: 71  |
numbness in the dark
a soul no longer plays it's part once distant future, now harsh truth it's revelation ends a youth not everyone will be the smartest not everyone will work their hardest not every poet is an artist one far-fetched expectation's farthest there's a middle of the bottom average citizen of sodom blind to evil, deaf to good doing nothing he shouldn't or should sun up Sunday, he will fail nor any day can he avail what's left of use, or less, for sale or trade to see his coffin nailed |
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| +Steven Curtis Lance |
Apr 19, 2011, 09:12 AM
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 Supreme God Group: Poet in Residence Posts: 8553 Joined: Jan 22, 2003 From: Perris, CA USA Member No.: 449 |
This speaks to the idea of individualism prevalent in the developed world, and the anxiety and feelings of inadequacy it can produce in the individual who bears the credit and the blame of his own judgment as both blessing and burden in uneasy equipoise, and there are some very satisfying rhymes here as well. Thanks. Some loverly lines afoot.
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