| burnout_00 |
Jun 22, 2008, 11:42 PM
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Overlord ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Basic Member Posts: 319 Joined: May 17, 2003 From: Los Angeles, CA Member No.: 71 |
Dead men walking...Marlboro's, pacifiers
the gifts of Allah Dollar, bill flipped by liars. Upside down pictures and... Gentleman Jack? a broken remote, is weed worse than crack... if i spend too much? Bad grammar. Hey, no GED, but retractable pens they're still 12 for 3. and words are for free, so i write myself down and if i wasn't on paper then where would i be? |
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| P.j.S |
Jun 16, 2009, 04:23 PM
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Overlord ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Basic Member Posts: 358 Joined: Jun 12, 2009 Member No.: 32189 |
Dead men walking...Marlboro's, pacifiers the gifts of Allah Dollar, bill flipped by liars. Upside down pictures and... Gentleman Jack? a broken remote, is weed worse than crack... if i spend too much? Bad grammar. Hey, no GED, but retractable pens they're still 12 for 3. and words are for free, so i write myself down and if i wasn't on paper then where would i be? Dead men walking...Marlboro's, pacifiers the gifts of Allah Dollar Bill, is coin flipped by liars. Upside down pictures and... Gentleman Jack? a broken remote, is weed worse than crack... if i spend too much? Bad grammar. Hey, no GED, but retractable pens they're still 12 for 3. and words are for free, so i write myself down and if i wasn't on paper then where would i be? What if the ink is Red? Would you get angry? I hope not. This is just an exercise to show you an idea. When you wrote "bill, flipped" I had the impression of coin come to mind. Coin flipped. The way I wrote it to show you makes me think that liars toss smaller coins to gamble for dollar bills. But the dollars could also be dollar coins that the liars are flipping too. I'm trying too show you how I get expansion from your style without offending you I hope. I like your style. Peter |
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