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| burnout_00 |
 Jun 22, 2008, 11:26 PM
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Overlord  Group: Basic Member Posts: 319 Joined: May 17, 2003 From: Los Angeles, CA Member No.: 71  |
Perforated...the pages of life
that much easier to crumble a history wasted in a plastic basket 3.39 with club card price the cost of scripture and bad advice vomit, spit it at the next-gen breed the awful stench of broadband speed. i took a page from the reckless spawn of the kids of baby boomers it read slackers are just alienated late bloomers those kids, siblings... sisters and brothers now too stoned to read too much into the heartache of their mothers what's to be expected of a child armed only with xeno pens and a notebook? hope? they done took... redemption? they won't look... |
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| P.j.S |
Jun 16, 2009, 07:38 AM
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Overlord Group: Basic Member Posts: 358 Joined: Jun 12, 2009 Member No.: 32189 |
The rythm of your words makes me wonder how this effort would serve as a lyric with the appropriate music to your taste.
A penny for my thought? It wouldn't take much ink in this keyboard case. But I hope that you get 12 pens of ink worth of good keyboard remarks from other people too about this poem. Pete |
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