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| misty_tears |
 Nov 29, 2006, 06:21 AM
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 Demi-God  Group: Basic Member Posts: 911 Joined: Apr 12, 2004 Member No.: 1979  |
Wrap around This silkiness With in his golden brown Those emerald roses Begin to bloom Fallen down With in white Their love lust Creates a feathered blanket She can slide upon Up and out In and over A sweat cloud of mist Replenishes Her blue grey soul Beside and through The crimson moon smiles While their love lust Retires Now their souls Are anew Entangled with an angel When I am with you |
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| +Steven Curtis Lance |
Nov 29, 2006, 07:27 PM
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 Supreme God Group: Poet in Residence Posts: 8581 Joined: Jan 22, 2003 From: Perris, CA USA Member No.: 449 |
Very nicely imagined and realized, with a quite satisfying finish, my dear friend and fellow poet Misty. The title is perfect and perfectly delightful, reflective of the poem itself.
I very much enjoyed this poem. Respect and solidarity, +Stevie |
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misty_tears Entangled Nov 29, 2006, 06:21 AM
Hey Hey I agree with Steven, imaginative with a great titl... Nov 29, 2006, 08:11 PM supani123 oh!
the autumn leaves the colored leaves.yet ... Nov 30, 2006, 06:09 AM
ahem this was posted at www darkpoetry com/dp/10370/894... Jan 08, 2007, 08:29 PM Culture
this was posted at www darkpoetry com/dp/10370/89... Jan 09, 2007, 10:44 AM |
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