HAYKU, IN JOLLYMOOD Options

[supani123]

The SUN a geyser
The MOON deemed as a cooler
THE EARTH a wheeler
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[Lindsay]

Is this thread just for HAYKUS? Or is it okay to write?:

One With GØD, Eternally

Stay not beneath this sky to weep for me, or
cry; I am not here, I did not die.
Only the earthy part of me lies here beneath
this stone and tree.
The real me in higher places dwells beyond
the limits of this flesh, this clay.
From this time forward, I am free to be at
one with GØD and thee...
I'm one with calm, with wind and rain, one
with light on golden grain;
I'm one with earth, and sky, and sea, and one
with time-eternity.
So, weep awhile! But do not mourn! I am not
here; I am reborn.
Only my form lies 'neath this earthy sod;
The real me, at last, is one with GØD.

Rev. Lindsay George King
1983
Copyright ©2006 Rev. Lindsay George King

[supani123]

sir

Really ' haiku'in true terms is

Haiku is a Japanese verse form that relies on brevity and simplicity to convey its message. It is usually three lines of five, seven, and five syllables, and frequently includes natural images or themes. It is believed to have been first written in the seventeenth century and is based on a Zen Buddhist philosophy of simplicity and the idea of perfection that excludes the extraneous.
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From the definition part. But i want to scribble A jolly verse[not in its seriousness ] so i termed it ' hayku' [hay in an indian language means[happiness].
one article 'THE' is actually missing from the first line. i edited it now. sorry
hope i am not wrong
with regards
supani