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Mandy Wood
post Apr 20, 2006, 06:55 AM
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Worn Road

i've barely begun to travel down this worn road

my body still aching from the last

my heart still limping

i'm going as fast as i can

trying hard to put the weight back on both feet

not to let the hurt consume

but i want to suffer through each step

to make the journey worth it

i want my heart to swell like my ankle

and when i reach the end i'll rest then
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post May 02, 2006, 10:06 AM
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Nice work Manders!
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post May 02, 2006, 11:04 AM
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Indeed it is nice work, Manders Flanders! Lolly is right, and I'm glad she found it and replied to it, so that it's moved back up the board again. I remember reading it and enjoying it, relating to it when you first posted it, but I was so busy writing my own stuff and dealing with other--far lesser!--websites that I didn't reply until now. I apologize for this, and for not replying to so many good poems of so many good poets. I am learning that the more time I spend here at BrainMeta, at home as it were, the happier and more grounded I feel; as you know, there are a lot of absolutely horrible poetry sites out there. Yowza!

I'm just glad you're here, that I'm here, and that there is a here here, for all of us.

I always enjoy your poetry.

Thanks and love,

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post May 02, 2006, 01:06 PM
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just fine stuff, as always. more please manders.
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post May 03, 2006, 10:10 PM
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great write
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post May 04, 2006, 05:57 PM
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Thanks All!!!
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