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| misty |
 Jan 04, 2006, 04:06 AM
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Blue tin eyes dim blink
crystal lullabies to freeze plastic harmony... |
 
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| supani123 |
Jan 05, 2006, 12:55 AM
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misty
beautifully expressed supani |
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Jan 06, 2006, 04:55 AM
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Thank you sup for your kind words.
misty.. |
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| +Steven Curtis Lance |
Jan 06, 2006, 01:24 PM
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I think you've really got the hang of this haiku thing, Misty!
Works for me, in any case; striking imagery and use of elements: "blue tin eyes," "crystal lullabies," and "plastic harmony." Very striking, and linear in its way, as a circle is a line; there's a sense of process here which I like, of going somewhere and arriving, to go around again. I like the way you do the 'ku. Love, +Stevie |
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