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| misty |
 Dec 27, 2005, 03:40 AM
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The sparkle in your eye
Beams up to the sky Not even the sun can try |
 
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| +Steven Curtis Lance |
Dec 27, 2005, 03:48 AM
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 Supreme God  Group: Poet in Residence Posts: 8551 Joined: Jan 22, 2003 From: Perris, CA USA Member No.: 449 |
Hey, this is nice, Misty.
I like these haiku-like structures the way you and Supani make them best. I like eye-sparkles very much. If I were a haiku maker, I would make a haiku about this too. But I had better leave it to you, and to our friend Supani. Hey, by the way, my son Stevie II, who usually just calls himself Steve Lance, is in two bands now: Narwhal, and The Shark That Ate My Friend. They both have MySpaces. He plays keyboards in them, and he's really, really good. I like to wear the band shirts; I get 'em free! They like my books, too (the band guys and the fans). It's almost my birthday! New Year's Eve, with a New Moon in Capricorn right then and there. Pretty sweet birthday present. Love, +Stevie |
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Dec 27, 2005, 05:20 AM
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God Group: Basic Member Posts: 1947 Joined: Nov 28, 2004 From: Guntur, Andhra Pradesh, India. Member No.: 4092 |
MISTY
REALLY A VERY NICE HAIKU WHY? WHY? WHY? WHY? wHY? NO BODY N EARTH CAN TRY LIKE LUMINARY ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ |
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Dec 27, 2005, 05:23 AM
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God Group: Basic Member Posts: 1947 Joined: Nov 28, 2004 From: Guntur, Andhra Pradesh, India. Member No.: 4092 |
dear steve
i also belong to the capricorn race celebrating birth day on 8th jan every year what a strange co incidence with good greets supani |
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